Tugas UAS Bahasa Inggris

     

Writer         : Gilang Fajarianan dan Alma Safrudin

Editor         : Alma Safrudin

Reviewer     : Fajar Juantoro

 

List of activities in ESP for Electrical Engineering

1.       Short Article about Electrical Engineering

2.       5W1H Questions

3.       Verbal and Nominal Sentences

4.       Tenses and It’s Pattern

5.       Active and Passive Construction

6.       List of Vocabulary

7.       Translation into Indonesia

8.       Reasons Why Writer Uses Tenses

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Impact of Electrification for Indonesia

 

The era of electric vehicles in recent years has become a trend or very hotly discussed by the people of Indonesia. How not, this is a new technology that can only be felt by the people of Indonesia today. But will this electric vehicle be a solution to the problems experienced by Indonesia in various fields?

Electric vehicles in the form of motorcycles or cars in their emergence in Indonesia, especially electric cars, are very public attention who feel amazed, amazed, curious, or amazed by technological developments that can be developed in public transportation modes which are often needed to move from point A to point B

The invention of this electric car has a goal in its development, namely to minimize the replacement of the use of gasoline-engined or diesel-engined vehicles whose oil reserves or resources will run out and cannot be regenerated. Therefore, the development of electric vehicles is developed every year so that it can match or exceed the quality of gasoline-powered cars.

In terms of infrastructure, Indonesia is still unable to meet expectations if it wants to replace conventional vehicles into electric vehicles, which can be seen at the General Electric Vehicle Charging Station (SPKLU) which is only available along the Java Island TOL and also at the PLN office in a large area. But over time, this has been resolved by adding SPKLU in every place.

In terms of resources, the most important component needed by electric cars is the battery used to drive an electric vehicle in Indonesia. In addition, these basic materials are also imported abroad. The basic material is in the form of Lithium-Ion which has a lot of reserves in Indonesia and can also be a staple commodity that Indonesia can be proud of as an economic driver.

On the economic side, having the resources needed for the basic materials used for the manufacture of electric vehicles can help foreign investors who produce electric vehicles and also absorb labor in Indonesia so that employment opportunities are widely opened and also absorb workers in Indonesia. reduce unemployment in Indonesia.

In terms of the effectiveness of their use, electric vehicles have very low operating costs when compared to conventional vehicles. For example, if the use of Pertalite type of fuel oil (BBM) is usually a car can run as far as 15 KM in 1 liter of filling and with a budget of IDR 10,000.00. Meanwhile, electric vehicles with a budget of around IDR 1,400.00 can run as far as 8-10 KM.

In the surrounding environment, electric cars do not have carbon dioxide gas that is harmful to the environment and humans because they do not have energy that is burned so that it is different from conventional vehicles which usually burn gas that is burned continuously every day and also by the wider community.

In terms of facilities, electric cars can enjoy cheap taxes so it is very nice to have them because they are also supported by the Indonesian government. In addition, if we live in Jakarta, we will be free from the odd-even rule which will make it difficult if our vehicle is different from the odd or even calendar.

In the presidential instruction (INPRES) delivered by Mr. Joko Widodo, he proposed the Presidential Instruction "Take the necessary steps according to their respective main tasks, functions, and authorities to accelerate the program to use battery-based motorized vehicles (battery electric vehicles) as official vehicles. operational,".

So in conclusion, electric vehicles can help the country in various ways that have been described above and can be a substitute for conventional vehicles that might happen in the future. As well as in human health and the environment, it can have a positive impact in the form of reducing carbon dioxide gas which can cause disturbances to the human lungs and also air quality.

If the government strongly agrees with the plan to replace electrification-based vehicles, it can add or build existing infrastructure in Indonesia so that there can be many electric vehicles and also feel comfortable in using them if you want to charge their vehicles.

 

Ø 5W1H Questions

SENTENCE BUILDING

 

No	WH	Sentence Building
1	Who	Who can approve his electric vehicle?
	Answer	The government can approve the application of electric vehicles as a substitute for vehicles.
2	Who	Who talks about electric vehicles?
	Answer	Indonesian society talk about electric vehicles.
3	What	What is the purpose and development of electric cars in Indonesia?
	Answer	The purpose and developmet of electric cars in Indonesia is to minimize or replace the use of gasoline-engined or diesel-engined vehicles where the oil reserves or resources will run out and cannot be regenerated.
4	What	What are the important components needed by an electric car?
	Answer	An important component needed by an electric car is a battery that is used to drive an electric vehicle
5	Where	Where is the place to charge public electric vehicles in Indonesia?
	Answer	The place to charge public electric vehicles in Indonesia is only available on Java Island toll roads and PLN offices in large areas
6	Where	where did Mr. Joko Widodo convey the program for using electric vehicles?
	Answer	Mr. Joko Widodo convey the program for using electric vehicles in the presidential instruction program (INPRES)
7	Why	Why can't Indonesia replace conventional vehicles with electric vehicles?
	Answer	Indonesia can't replace conventional vehicles with electric vehicles because there is no public battery charging place for electric cars in Indonesia
8	Why	Why are electric vehicles discussed by Indonesian people?
	Answer	Electric vehicles are discussed because electric vehicles are a new technology that can be felt by the people of Indonesia. And has very low operating costs compared to conventional vehicles
9	When	When will the government implement the program for the use of electric vehicles?
	Answer	The government will implement the program for the use of electric vehicles to accelerate the implementation of the program for the use of battery electric vehicles (battery electric vehicles) as operational service vehicles
10	When	When will conventional vehicles switch to electrified vehicles?
	Answer	conventional vehicles will switch to electrified vehicles if the government strongly agrees with the plan to replace conventional vehicles with electrification-based vehicles
11	How	How can electric vehicles be more effective for the environment?
	Answer	electric vehicles can be more effective for the environment because electric vehicles do not have carbon dioxide gas that can harm the environment
12	How	How can Indonesia fulfill the wish to replace conventional vehicles with electric vehicles?
	Answer	Indonesia can be fulfill the wish to replace conventional vehicles  namely by building public electric vehicle charging stations (spklu) in every region in Indonesia

 

A.            A. Verbal and Nominal Sentences

Clues: Verbal sentences (V) are those, which start with a verb. Non-verbal sentences start with a noun or pronoun, or with derivative nouns. Verbal sentences consist of a verb + subject + object or adverbial phrase. The subject and object can be either nouns or pronouns. Nominal sentence  (N) also known as equational sentence is a linguistic term that refers to a nonverbal sentence (i.e. a sentence without a finite verb). As a nominal sentence does not have a verbal predicate, it may contain a nominal predicate, an adjectival predicate, in Semitic languages also an adverbial predicate or even a prepositional predicate.

 

Ø Verbal Sentences

No	Sentences	Identify
1	The era of electric vehicles in recent years has become a trend or very hotly discussed.	Verbal
2	A new technology can only be felt by the people of Indonesia today	Verbal
3	This electric vehicle will act as solution to the problems experienced by Indonesia in various fields?	Verbal
4	Bus can be developed in public transportation modes which are often needed to move from point A to point B	Verbal
5	A goal in its development has to minimize the replacement of the use of gasoline-engined or diesel-engined vehicles whose oil reserves or resources will run out and cannot be regenerated	Verbal
6	Electric vehicles can match or exceed the quality of gasoline-powered cars	Verbal
7	In terms of infrastructure, Indonesia is still unable to meet expectations if it wants to replace conventional vehicles into electric vehicles, which can be seen at the General Electric Vehicle Charging Station (SPKLU) which is only available along the Java Island TOL and also at the PLN office in a large area.	Verbal
8	Electric vehicles has been resolved by adding SPKLU in every place.	Verbal
9	In terms of resources, the most important component needed by electric cars is the battery used to drive an electric vehicle in Indonesia.	Verbal
10	The basic material is in the form of Lithium-Ion which has a lot of reserves in Indonesia and can also be a staple commodity that Indonesia can be proud of as an economic driver.	Verbal

 

ØNominal Sentences

 

No	Sentences	Identify
1	The era of electric vehicles	Nominal
2	The people of Indonesia	Nominal
3	Technological developments	Nominal
4	Public transportation modes	Nominal
5	The invention of this electric car	Nominal
6	The replacement	Nominal
7	The use of gasoline-engined or diesel-engined vehicles	Nominal
8	Gasoline-powered cars	Nominal
9	The General Electric Vehicle Charging Station (SPKLU)	Nominal
10	An electric vehicle in Indonesia	Nominal

 

 

 

    

      B.   Active and Passive Construction

Clues: Active sentence is a sentence where the subject performs the action of the verb. For example: John kicked the ball. ("John" is the subject. "John" is performing the action of the verb "kick." Therefore, this is an active sentence.) An active sentence is the opposite of a passive sentence. In a passive sentence, the action of the main verb is done to the subject. The passive voice occurs when the person or thing that performs an action is not the grammatical subject of the sentence. Instead, the person or thing that receives the action is placed before the verb. Passive sentences are formed using the verb to be combined with a past participle.

 

Ø Active and Passive Construction

No	Sentences	Active	Passive
1	The era of electric vehicles has become a trend in recent years.	✓
	A trand in recent years has been become the era of electric vehicles.		✓
2	The people of Indonesia have been discussing the trend of electric vehicles in recent years.		✓
	The trend of electric vehicles in recent years have been being discusssed by the people of Indonesia.	✓
3	This is a new technology that can only be felt by the people of Indonesia today.	✓
	The people of Indonesia today can only feel this is a new echnology.		✓
4	This electric vehicle is a new technology that can only be felt by the people of Indonesia today.		✓
5	Electric vehicles in the form of motorcycles or cars have emerged in Indonesia.	✓
6	The use of gasoline-engined or diesel-engined vehicles will be minimized by the development of this electric car.		✓
7	Electric cars have attracted very public attention.	✓
8	The development of electric vehicles is developed every year to match or exceed the quality of gasoline-powered cars.		✓
9	Technological developments can be developed in public transportation modes.	✓
10	Indonesia is still unable to meet expectations if it wants to replace conventional vehicles with electric vehicles, as seen at the General Electric Vehicle Charging Station (SPKLU) which is only available along the Java Island TOL and also at the PLN office in a large area.		✓
11	The invention of this electric car has a goal in its development.	✓
12	The most important component needed by electric cars, the battery, is imported from abroad.		✓
13	Indonesia wants to replace conventional vehicles into electric vehicles.	✓
14	The resources needed for the basic materials used for the manufacture of electric vehicles can help foreign investors who produce electric vehicles and also absorb labor in Indonesia.		✓
15	The General Electric Vehicle Charging Station (SPKLU) is only available along the Java Island TOL and also at the PLN office in a large area.	✓
16	Employment opportunities are widely opened and unemployment is reduced in Indonesia by the manufacture of electric vehicles.		✓
17	This has been resolved by adding SPKLU in every place.	✓
18	Electric vehicles have very low operating costs when compared to conventional vehicles.		✓
19	The most important component needed by electric cars is the battery used to drive an electric vehicle in Indonesia.	✓
20	Carbon dioxide gas that is harmful to the environment and humans is not produced by electric cars.		✓

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

    C.   List of Vocabulary

No	Vocabulary	Pronoun Spelling	Meaning
1	Electric	Eˈlektrik	Listrik
2	Minimize	Minemiz	Meminimalkan
3	Battery	Badere	Baterai
4	Cars	Kars	Mobil
5	Oil	Oil	Minyak
6	Trend	Trend	Tren
7	Technology	Tek’naleje	Teknologi
8	Amazed	E’mazd	Terpesona
9	Goal	Gol	Tujuan
10	Development	De’velepment	Perkembangan

 

 

 

D. Tenses and It’s Pattern

Please identify the tenses of ten sentences you take from the article. Learn the matrix clues below.

Ø Tenses

 

No	Sentences	Identify
1	The era of electric vehicles in recent years has become a trend.	Present Simple Tense
2	This is a new technology that can only be felt by the people of Indonesia today.	Present Continous Tense
3	The basic material is in the form of Lithium-Ion which has a lot of reserves in Indonesia.	Present Perfect Tense
4	Their oil reserves or resources will run out and cannot be regenerated.	Past Simple Tense
5	If the government strongly agrees with the plan to replace electrification-based vehicles, it can add or build existing infrastructure in Indonesia.	Future Simple Tense

 

 

E. Translation into Indonesia 

Dampak Elektrifikasi Bagi Indonesia

 

Era kendaraan listrik beberapa tahun belakangan ini semakin menjadi tren ataupun sangat hangat diperbincangkan oleh masyarakat Indonesia. Bagaimana tidak, ini merupakan sebuah teknologi baru yang baru bisa dirasakan oleh masyarakat Indonesia dimasa sekarang ini. Namun apakah kendaraan listik ini nantinya akan menjadi penyelesaian masalah yang sedang dialami oleh Indonesia dalam berbagai bidang?

Kendaraan listrik berupa kendaraan sepeda motor ataupun mobil dalam kemunculannya di Indonesia terutama mobil listrik, sangat menyita perhatian publik yang merasa kagum, heran, merasa pernasaran, ataupun terkesima dengan perkembangan teknologi yang bisa dikembangkan pada mode transportasi masyarakat yang sering kali dibutuhkan untuk berpindah dari titik A ke titik B.

Penemuan mobil listrik ini memiliki tujuan dalam pengembangannya, yaitu untuk meminimalisir ataupun mengganti penggunaan kendaraan bermesin bensin ataupun bermesin diesel yang dimana cadangan minyaknya ataupun sumber dayanya akan habis dan tidak bisa dibuat kembali. Oleh karena itu pengembangan kendaraan listrik ini terus dikembangkan setiap tahunnya agar bisa menyamai ataupun melebihi kualitas dari mobil bermesin bensin.

Dalam segi infrastrukturnya, Indonesia masih belum bisa memenuhi harapan jika ingin mengganti kendaraan konvensional menjadi kendaraan listrik yang terlihat pada Stasiun Pengisian Kendaraan Listrik Umum (SPKLU) yang hanya tersedia di sepanjang TOLL Pulau Jawa dan juga pada kantor PLN disuatu daerah yang besar. Tetapi seiring perkembangan waktu, pastinya hal ini sudah bisa teratasi dengan penambahan SPKLU ditiap tempat.

Dalam sisi sumber dayanya, komponen terpenting yang dibutuhkan oleh mobil listrik yaitu baterai yang digunakan sebagai penggerak suatu kendaraan listrik ada di Indonesia. Selain itu, bahan dasar tersebut juga diimpor ke luar negeri. Bahan dasar tersebut berupa Lithium-Ion yang sangat banyak sekali cadangannya di Indonesia dan juga bisa sebagai komoditi pokok yang bisa dibanggakan Indonesia sebagai penggerak Ekonomi.

Dalam sisi ekonomisnya, dengan adanya sumber daya yang dibutuhkan untuk bahan dasar yang digunakan untuk pembuatan baterai kendaraan listrik hendaknya bisa mendatangkan investor-investor asing yang memproduksi kendaraan listrik dan juga hendaknya bisa juga menyerap tenaga kerja di Indonesia sehingga lapangan kerja bisa terbuka secara luas dan juga mengurangi tingkat pengganguran di Indonesia.

Dalam sisi keefektifan penggunaannya, kendaraan listrik memiliki biaya operasinal yang sangat murah jika dibandingkan dengan kendaraan konvensional. Misalkan saja jika penggunaan bahan bakar minyak (BBM) jenis Pertalite biasanya mobil bisa berjalan sejauh 15 KM dalam 1 liter pengisian dan dengan budget RP 10.000,00. Sedangkan kendaraan listrik dengan budget sekitar RP 1.400.00 bisa menjalankan sejauh 8-10 KM.

Dalam segi lingkungannya, mobil listrik tidak memiliki gas karbondioksida yang membahayakan bagi lingkungan dan manusia karena tidak memiliki tenaga yang dibakar sehingga berbeda dengan kendaraan konvensional yang biasanya membakar gas karbondioksida yang dibakar terus-menerus setiap harinya dan juga oleh masyarakat luas.

Dalam fasilitasnya, mobil listrik dapat menikmati pajak yang murah sehingga sangat senang sekali jika memilikinya karena didukung juga oleh pemerintah Indonesia. Selain itu, jika kita tinggal di Jakarta maka akan terbebas dari aturan ganjil-genap yang akan menyulitkan jika nomor kendaraan kita berbeda dari penanggalan ganjil ataupun genap.

Dalam instruksi presiden (INPRES) yang disampaikan oleh Bapak Joko Widodo, mengajukan Inpres "Mengambil langkah-langkah yang diperlukan sesuai tugas pokok, fungsi, dan kewenangan masing-masing untuk melakukan percepatan pelaksanaan program penggunaan kendaraan bermotor listrik berbasis baterai (battery electric vehicle) sebagai kendaraan dinas operasional,".

Jadi dalam kesimpulannya, kendaraan lisrik bisa jadi membantu negara dalam berbagai hal yang sudah dipaparkan diatas serta dapat menjadi pengganti kendaraan konvensional yang mungkin saja dimasa depan. Serta dalam kesehatan manusia dan lingkungan dapat membawa dampak positif berupa pengurangan gas karbondioksida yang bisa membuat gangguan pada paru-paru manusia dan juga kualitas udara.

Hendaknya jika pemerintah sangat setuju dengan rencana penggantian kendaraan konvensional ke kendaraan berbasis elektrifikasi, bisa menambah atau membangun infrastruktur yang ada di Indonesia sehingga para penggunaan kendaraan listrik bisa menjadi banyak dan juga merasa diberi kemudahan dalam penggunaanya jika ingin mengisi daya kendaraanya. 

 

F. Please sum-up the article by explaining the reason why author use the tenses.

The reason the author uses tenses is to make it easier to explain the contents of the article and show that the research results of the article refer to existing and valid facts and facts, both positive and negative.

 

Lembar Simulasi

PRAKTIK MENYUNTING NASKAH

DALAM BAHASA INGGRIS

(PBLL-Editing)

 

Serahkan kumpulan portfolio hasil belajar Bahasa Inggris pada saat UAS berupa: UTS, bahanPresentasi PPT Kelompokdenganbukti-buktiberikut:

1.     Lembar asli JawabanUjian Tengah Semester (UTS), Idol, PPT kelompok

2.     Bukti Perbaikan dalam bentuk Terketik Rapi

3.     Bukti Penerapan Simbol Penyuntingan oleh Editor MitraBelajar di Kelas

4.     Naskah Bersih hasil suntingan Editor Mitra Belajar di Kelas

5.     Lembar Bukti Penerapan Hasil Penyuntingan

 

Catatan:

1.   Naskah Bersih hasil suntingan dikumpulkan oleh Koordinator untuk layout  bersih dan digandakan menjadi buku karya kelas.

2.   Judul buku dan gambaran Desain Cover serta Pengantar Buku akan diemail ke Koordinator oleh Dosen sebagai Supervisor.

3.   Pembuatan Video flog bersifat individual untuk kemungkinan memperoleh nilai optimal (A).

 

 

EDITORIAL SKILL IN ENGLISH PUBLIPRENEUR-BASED LANGUAGE LEARNING

(PBLL-Editing)

INSTRUCTIONS
1.           Use the red ink pen to mark your editorial findings 2.           Write the name of the manuscript’s writer within the box 3.           Write your name as an editor within the editor’s box 4.           Write the title of the manuscript 5.           Treat the draft as an accepted manuscript to the Editorial Department. 6.           Edit the manuscript by using the editorial signs 7.           Put the number of your editorial findings (mechanical, substantive, pictorial) within the box right- side 8.           Write your verbal verification of suggestion, comment, or input for the improvement of the manuscript. 9.           Give your editorial judgment about the manuscript from the perspective of prewriting, drafting, revising, editing, publishing, marketing, and delivering) 10.        Good Luck..be your best.
Students’ Identity				Writer			Editor
Nama				Gilang Fajariana			Alma Safrudin
Study Program				Electrical Engineering			Electrical Engineering
Title of Manuscript				Why do different countries have different electric outlet plugs?
C=Competence : NC= Non Competence
No			Editorial Findings		Number	Key Word		C	NC
A			Mechanical Editing						types
			·          Types		-	-		C	-
			·          Words		-	-		C	phrase
			·          Phrase		-	-		C	-
			·          Clause		-	-		C	-
			·          Punctuations		-	-		C	-
			·          Comma		-			C	-
			·          Colon		-	-		C	-
			·         Semi Colon		-	-		C	-
			·         Preposition		-	-		C	-
			·         Dictions		-	-		C	-
B			Substantive Editing
			·          Content Accuracy		-	-		C	-
			·          Language Consisteny		-	-		c	-
			·          Message Originality		-	-		c	-
			·          Reader’s Interest		-	-		c	-
			·          Coherence		-	-		c	-
C			Pictorial Editing
			·          Harmony		-	-		c	-
			·          Balancing		-	-		c	-
			·          White Space		-	-			-
		·          Color			-	-		c	-
		·
	Verbal Verification:   i just veryfied that the writing of the article was good in choosing words and senteences but there were a few words and the placement of sentences which i personally thought were not quite right so tried to edit them with the help of editting symbols that had been provided by my lecturer.
	Editorial Judgment I think the sentence-by-sentence that the author wrote is very good and very easy to understand for readers to read, but in writing, there are several words that I need to improve, namely, the words finished, grounding, carry, and started. but overall I appreciate the author in choosing sentence by sentence.